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            It is undeniable that the technology in the world has improved by leaps and bounds. In fact, our world has shrunk as a result of the invention of computers and mobile phones. In this era of globalization, almost everyone possesses a mobile phones and even a computer. All the documents are being processed by computers instead of using manual work. Much has been said about the adverse effects brought by the increased usage of computers and mobile phones. I partially agree that the usage of computers and mobile phones has improved their relationship with family and friends although it may cause the lost of communication skills.

            Nowadays, even a student in primary school is able to possess a mobile phone as a result of advancement in technology. However, prolonged usage of computers and mobile phones causes the users to lose their communication skills and socialize skills. Most of the youngsters like to stay inside their room to chat with their friends through windows messengers. This has caused the young people to lose their communication skills as the chances for them to talk to their friends face to face has reduced. They seldom socialize and interact with other people. In long terms, they might become introvert and live in their own world. Communicate with people by using sms is also no less a reason that causes young people lost their socialize skills. The effect is detrimental because as we can seen, most of the unemployment were caused by their poor communication skills.

            The invention of computers and mobile phones make it easier for us to contact with our family members. For those who are studying or working overseas, computers and mobile phones are certainly an important device that enables them to contact with their families. By using mobile phones or internet, they will be able to know the current situation of their families or inform their family about their current situation. Indirectly, this will help to strengthen the family bond between the family members. In addition, the invention of mobile phones enables the family members to contact with each other wherever they are. This will promote understanding among family members and they will have more topics to talk with one another.

            Furthermore, the invention of computers and mobile phones enables us to have more friends and understand them better. In the past, the relationship between friends are not so close as they cannot contact with their friends easily. With the invention of computer, they are able to chat with one another even after school time. They may use windows messenger to chat and discuss their homework. With the mobile phones, they can chat with their friends whenever they want. Undeniably, this will promote good understanding and rapport among them. By using computer, they are able to know friends from different countries and understand their cultures. Consequently, they will have a wider circle of friends, be more receptive and more understand of one another.

            In conclusion, computers and mobile phones brings both bane and boon to the society. We must use the technological devices in correct manner to ensure that we get the full benefits from it.

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